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2017年6月大学英语四级高分范文100篇【命题分析+答题攻略+强化训练】试读:

第1章 大学英语四级写作指南

自2013年12月考试起,全国大学英语四、六级考试委员对四、六级考试的试卷结构和测试题型作出了局部调整。四级作文考试变动不是很大,其具体写作思路与之前类似,属现象分析原因,写作方法仍可沿用之前的写作思路。

1.1 大纲要求

最新大学英语四级考试大纲对写作部分的要求如下:

写作部分考查考生运用英语进行书面表达的能力,所占分值比例为15%,考试时间30分钟。写作部分选用考生所熟悉的题材,要求考生根据所提供的信息及提示(如:提纲、情景、图片或图表等)写出一篇短文,字数为120-180词。

大学英语四级考试写作部分要求考生达到教育部高等教育司最新《大学英语课程教学要求》(教学大纲)中的一般要求,即“能完成一般性写作任务;能描述个人经历、观感、情感和发生的事件等;能写常见的应用文;能就一般性话题或提纲在半小时内写出120个词的短文,内容基本完整,用词恰当,语意连贯。能掌握基本的写作技能。”

1.2 命题分析

题材分析:与近六年题型相似,题材仍是要求考生熟悉的热点话题,如校园生活类、热会热点类、资源环境类、道德品质类和永恒话题类等等。这点与CET考试所面向的对象相符,也符合CET考试作文重在考查考生英语运用能力的作风,不在选题的熟悉程度上区分考生。通过对CET考试作文选题的分析,考生平时可以对此有所准备,比如关注热点新闻,思考热点话题,积累典型素材。

命题分析:命题形式多样化。按提纲的形式,CET作文大致可以分为:提纲作文、情景作文、图表作文。仔细研究历年真题,其中提纲作文和情景作文所占的比重较大。

◆提纲作文

提纲作文是四级作文考试到目前为止最常见的。它给出作文的英文题目以及传统的两点式或三点式的提纲,提纲有时是英文的,但大多数时候是用中文给出的。每段的提纲规定了各段的主旨,要求考生围绕这个中心制定主题句,再顺着主题句展开段落,最后用一句总结句回应主题。

◆情景作文

情景作文是四级作文考试常考题型之一。题目中给定一个情景,或者以图画的形式展现出一个情景,要求考生在这个范围内充分发挥想象力,精心构思出一篇符合情景要求、意思连贯的短文。这类作文限定条件比较少,考生自由发挥程度较大。通常是采用书信形式,所以要求考生掌握书信的基本写作格式,有时也需要采用议论文的格式。

◆图表作文

图表作文是是考生觉得较难应付的作文形式。图表作文一般在题目中给出一个或几个统计表格、柱状图或饼状结构图等,通常还给出作文的标题和一些提示,一般要写成议论文或者说明文,要求考生:1)用文字描述图表,客观解释图表中所传递的信息并找出某种规律或趋势;2)就图表中所反映出的某种趋势或问题分析其原因或后果。

无论四级考试的作文命题形式如何变化,但是万变不离其踪,其写作的思路仍和以往现象分析原因类似,即提出问题,分析问题和解决问题三部分。写作的大致模板也就是:第一段,提出现象句+引出下文句;第二段,分析问题(列举原因);第三段,解决问题(再次提出观点)+展望。

体裁分析:大学英语四级考试的作文体裁多种多样,包括议论文、应用文、记叙文和说明文,其中议论文所占比重最大。但需要注意的是,有时一篇作文中可能考查多种写作体裁,例如记叙文中的夹叙夹议,议论文中包含有说明或记叙等。

◆议论文

议论文是作者对某个问题或某件事进行分析、评论,表明自己的观点、立场、态度、看法、主张的一种文体。议论文一般由论点,论据,论证三个基本要素组成。四级作文考试中议论文的三大具体要求就是:1)开头观点鲜明;2)结尾紧扣主题;3)中间段落突出主题句且衔接自然。

根据历年真题,议论文还可以分为四种类型:对比选择型、现象阐释型、问题解决型和论说反驳型。(一)对比选择型:辨析两种对立观点。

此类型的作文是大学英语四级考试最常见的题型。它的特点十分明显。作文题目要求较明确,富有针对性,即直接要求考试比较两种观点或做法,进而陈述自己对问题或事务的态度或观点。(二)现象解释型:分析现象,阐述其成因利弊。

此类作文在四级考试作文中也最为常见。命题主要要求考生对某一社会现象进行解释并加以评论,其基本结构是:首先说明现状;其次阐述这种现状产生或存在的原因;最后做出分析,提出建议或总结观点。(三)问题解决型:分析问题,找出成因,提出解决办法。

此类作文要求考生从提示性文字或图表、图画入手,解释提示性文字、图表、图画反映出的问题,提出问题的危害性或解决这一问题的紧迫性;然后对问题展开分析,提出解决问题的方案或应对措施;最后一段要求考生表明自己的态度、做法等。(四)论说反驳型:支持或驳斥一种观点。

此类作文往往要求考生根据题目给出论点,按照提纲的结构要求对其下论证,然后表明自己的立场和看法。通过摆事实、讲道理的方式剖析事物,论述事理,发表意见,确立或否认某一主张。

◆应用文

2004年,大学英语四、六级考试委员会声明:以后的四、六级考试侧重考查考生的英语实际运用能力,应用文成为考查的重点题型。

应用文是指在日常生活和工作中使用的文体,包括书信、通告、演讲致辞等。像书信、演讲稿等在生活中得到实际运用的文体在四级考试中出现的次数较多。文章所涉及的内容也多种多样,大部分都与日常生活比较贴近。

书信的种类千变万化,如建议信、投诉信、申请信(包括求职信)、邀请信、感谢信、道歉信、推荐信等,再加上口头应用文,如演讲稿、通知等,是考试中较难的内容。在平时的积累中需要多注意这类文体的写作格式和方法。

◆记叙文

记叙文是以叙述为主要表达方式,交待已发生的事件或人物的行为经历的文体。这类文章通常所叙述事情的时间、地点、人物、事件、原因及结果六大要素常见的叙述方式有顺叙、倒叙、插叙和夹叙夹议。夹叙夹议类文章在四级考试作文中经常会及到。

◆说明文

说明文是以说明为主要的表达方式来介绍事物的状态、性质、功能、或阐明事理,目的是给人以知识的一种文体。常用的说明方法有:下定义、举例子、打比方、作比较、引用数据等。写说明文时,需要尽量达到三点要求,即:抓住事物特征,运用说明顺序使文章条理分明,语言准确且通俗易懂。

字数要求:本次考试大纲明确指出,字数应不少于120词,不可多于180 词,所以四级作文考试的推荐词数为120-150词。

1.3 评分标准

评分标准可以帮助考生更清晰、更明了地了解得分点在哪里,应该注意的问题是什么。这样,考生在平时练习和考试过程中才能够应对自如。具体的评分标准如下:

本题满分为15分,成绩分为六个档次:13-15分、10-12分、7-9分、4-6分、1-3分和0分。各档次的评分标准见下表:

1.4 应试技巧

大学英语四级考试中的写作部分的目的是“考查学生用英语进行书面表达的能力”。除了要有丰富的知识储备(包括大量的阅读、一定量能灵活运用的词汇以及用英语思维的能力)外,考生想要在写作部分取得高分还要注意以下“七大应试技能”。

◆认真审题 确定主题

审题是写好一篇文章的最重要的一个环节。根据《大学英语教学大纲》的要求,四级写作是一种给题目、提示、及指导的短文写作,因此,紧紧围绕其题旨是至关重要的。考生在审题的过程应当仔细审阅作文的说明要求和所给的材料,比如段首句、提纲、关键词、图表等,确定相应的体裁(确定是议论文、说明文、记叙文还是应用文),明确文章的中心思想,从而明确作文的写作范围和侧重点。审题的主要目的首先是确定主题,即根据题目或材料明确文章的主题思想,明确主题也就是立意的过程。一篇文章只能有一个主题思想,要鲜明、深刻、新颖。

◆粗拟提纲

确定中心思想之后,正式写文章之前,十分有必要先粗拟一个提纲。所谓“粗拟”,即不必每句话都写出来,简短地拟几个主题句,以及一些相关用词,这样做的目的是既节约时间又能规定思路,不至于偏离主题。

◆确立主题句

审题立意后,考生应用最精炼的语言概括出段落的主题句。 柯群胜在其文章中谈到,“主题句是段落的中心,有提携全段的作用。”所以,主题句最好放在每段的段首,这个位置醒目突出,能让阅卷人一眼就能明了全段大意。同时,主题句结构要完整,表达意义要准确,有高度的概括性,且用词要精炼生动。

◆下笔成文

无论是什么文体,每一段落都要有其合适的主题句,对整个段落起提纲挈领的作用。主题句后要选择与文章主题形成有机的统一体的材料,这些材料最好来自日常生活,真实且具有说服力。叙述这些材料的句子要尽量写得具体、生动,可以举些例子。

在文章写作过程中,需要使段落之间的衔接紧密,要用一些过渡词来连接。这样可以使文章自然,流畅。过渡词是连接句与句之间的纽带,在行文中起承上启下的作用,同时体现文章的逻辑性。使用较多的过渡词为(1)表顺序关系的:first,first of all,in the first place,secondly等;(2)表转折关系的:but,however,yet,unless,except for等;(3)表列举关系的:for instance/for example,in addition,furthermore,besides等;(4)表因果关系的:consequently,as a result, thus,therefore,hence,owing to,due to,thanks to等;(5)表总结关系的:to sum up,in conclusion,generally speaking,all in all等。适当地使用过渡词能使文章启、承、转、合融会贯通,成为一体。这些都是很容易引起阅卷人的注意,可以拿到作文高分的地方。

最后,文章的结尾一定要有一个结论性的句子,总结全文,点明主题,使文章前后呼应,相得益彰。

◆文章的修改和润色

当完成一篇文章后,若时间允许,要进行修改和润色。考生可从以下几个方面入手修改。例如:文章的论据是否能有力支撑论点、各段落的主题句是否紧紧围绕主题、段落之间的连接是否连贯、文章开头和结尾是否照应等。另外,考生还须要注意段落之间的衔接,注意句型转换、变化,注意全文中时态、语态的正确运用,改正明显的语法错误。

◆长短句结合

句子既要生动,又要简明扼要。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、复杂句和复合句并用,还可以使用简化句等,一些较复杂的结构如独立结构,分词结构等也可以使用。此外,还可以使用一些特殊句式,如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力,以增加文章“亮点”。强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。

◆卷面整洁

卷面的整洁与否也是得高分的必要条件,整洁的卷面,给阅卷人以最初的良好印象,这样阅卷人可以给出较高的印象分。因此,平时需要注意书法的练习,需要书写工整。

第2章 大学英语四级高分范文100篇

◆校园生活类

1.Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling [2010年6月真题]

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写;

2.出现这种情况的原因;

3.为了改变这种状况,我认为……【审题构思】

在英语学习中,不少学生不重视拼写,经常在写作中写错单词,阅读起来很困难。本题以此为话题,相信考生不会陌生。根据提纲,文章首先提出不少学生不重视拼写的现象,其次论述出现这种情况的原因,如学生自己的原因和老师的原因,最后提出改变这种状况的建议。【范文】

Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling

Correct spelling is a basic skill in studying English. (1)However, nowadays spelling is neglected by many students in their English study.

(2)They have their own reasons for misspelling. First of all, they prefer an easy way of studying language, which causes some losses and changes in spelling. Second, the teachers are not very strict with students’ spelling. In China, teachers seem to be more concerned with grammar and vocabulary rather than spelling.

(3)To change this bad habit, from my point of view, the teachers and students should work together. On the one hand, the teachers should pay more attention to students’ spelling, asking the students to be conscious of the importance of correct spelling from the very beginning of their English study. On the other hand, the students themselves are supposed to be aware of the necessity of correct spelling in English study.

In conclusion, correct spelling is so important that both teachers and students should try their best to achieve correct spelling.【行文点评】

(1) 提出与文章话题相关的现象,为下文的论述作铺垫。

(2) 这是第二段的中心句,该段从学生和老师两个方面指出了原因。

(3) 这一段写为了改变这种状况老师和学生应该怎么做,与上文相呼应。【闪光词汇】

neglect v. 疏忽,忽视

be serious with 对……认真对待

be concerned with 关注……

be conscious of…=be aware of… 意识到……【经典句型】

①However, nowadays…is neglected by many students in their English study.

②To change this bad habit, from my point of view…should work together.

2.Creating a Green Campus [2009年12月真题]

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Creating a Green Campus. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.建设绿色校园很重要;

2.绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境……

3.为了建设绿色校园,我们应该……【审题构思】“绿色校园”是指在实现其基本教育功能的基础上,以可持续发展思想为指导,在学校全面的日常管理工作中纳入有益于环境的管理措施,并持续不断地改进,充分利用学校内外的一切资源和机会全面提高师生环境素养的学校。本题以建设绿色校园为话题,要求考生论述建设绿色校园的重要性,阐释绿色校园的含义,并要提出建设绿色校园的建议。【范文】

Creating a Green Campus

(1)Recently, “green campus” has become an increasingly  popular concept in universities and colleges, which, undoubtedly, will bring an everlasting benefit to both our campus and our society.

(2)“Green campus” not only means creating a green environment on campus, but also refers to that the students should be educated and have an environmental sense in their mind. Of course, this concept is of great importance for the students because it sets goals toward the future of the world. (3)“Green campus” plays an important part in educating the young generation and the consciousness of “green campus” will definitely produce a profound effect on their actions after their graduation.

In order to realize “green campus”, there is much work to do. (4)To begin with, it is necessary to work out effective principles for the development of (5)sustainable and recyclable campus. Then, it calls for people’s awareness of the serious pollution around us and actual action to reduce the waste. Finally, the ties between campus and society should be strengthened to ensure that “green campus” can work smoothly with the efforts of the whole society.【行文点评】

(1) 文章开头提出与话题相关的现象,这是一种很常见的开篇方式。

(2) 阐释“绿色校园”的含义。

(3) 此句指出了“绿色校园”对于学生的积极影响。

(4) 此段提出了建设“绿色校园”应该采取的三条措施。

(5) 这里使用了两个形容词进一步解释了“绿色校园”的含义。【闪光词汇】

everlasting adj. 永久的

definitely adv. 肯定地

profound adj. 深厚的,意义深远的

sustainable adj. 可持续的

recyclable adj. 可循环的【经典句型】

①Recently, “green campus” has become a more and more popular concept in universities and colleges, which, undoubtedly, will bring an everlasting benefit to both our campus and our society.

②“Green campus” not only means creating a green environment on campus, but also refers to that the students should be educated and have an environmental sense in their mind.

③“Green campus” plays an important part in educating the young generation and the consciousness of “green campus” will definitely produce a profound effect on their actions after their graduation.

3.Recreational activities [2008年6月真题]

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Recreational activities. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.娱乐活动多种多样;

2.娱乐活动可能使人们受益,也可能有危害性;

3.作为大学生,我的看法。【审题构思】

人们参加各种各样的娱乐活动,娱乐活动可能使人们受益,也可能有危害性。本题以此为话题,要求考生写一篇议论文。论述现今社会各种各样的娱乐活动,这些娱乐活动的利弊,并举例证明,例如有利于身心健康,可能让人陷入虚拟世界等,以及自己对这些活动的看法。【范文】

Recreational Activities

(1)People have access to a wealth of recreational activities, which help to release their strain and stress. These activities range from sports to online activities.

(2)There is an on-going hot debate arguing whether they are beneficial to the public or not. With regard to such a question, different people have different views. (3)Some people believe that recreational activities are helpful for them to keep healthy both physically and mentally. (4)However, some others claim that recreational activities also bring many problems. For instance, many young people are easily addicted to the virtual world, which seriously affects their study and health.

(5)In my view, I reckon that the advantages of recreational activities outweigh its disadvantages. They do give us a good chance to build a strong body and mind, which helps improve our work efficiency. As long as we can manage our time reasonably, the recreational activities will definitely provide more benefits to us.【行文点评】

(1) 开篇点题,指出人们能参加多种多样的娱乐活动。

(2) 引出本文讨论的主要问题。

(3) 指出一些人的观点,即娱乐活动使人们受益。

(4) 指出另一些人的观点,即娱乐活动有危害性。

(5) 提出自己的观点,认为娱乐活动利大于弊。【闪光词汇】

access n. 进入;使用权

recreational adj. 娱乐的,消遣的;休养的

release v. 释放

on-going adj. 正在进行的;继续的,持续的

with regard to adv. 关于;至于

reckon v. 认为;估计【经典句型】

①People have access to a wealth of recreational activities, which help to release their strain and stress.

②There is an on-going hot debate arguing whether they are beneficial to the public or not.

③In my view, I reckon that the advantages of recreational activities outweigh its disadvantages.

4.What Electives to Choose? [2007年12月真题]

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled What Electives to Choose. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.各大学开设了各种各样的选修课;

2.学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课;

3.以你自己为例……【审题构思】

大学开设了各种各样的选修课,学生可以选择去上自己感兴趣的课程,这极大地拓展了学生的知识面,充分地挖掘了学生的兴趣。本题以选修课为话题,考生很熟悉。本文首先要阐述大学开设了各种各样的选修课,然后论述学生因为各种原因,如因注重应用能力或个人兴趣等选择了不同的选修课,最后以自己为例,自己如何选择选修课。【范文】

What Electives to Choose?

With the reform of Chinese higher education, many colleges and universities have begun to put emphasis on nurturing students’ abilities. (1)As a result, all kinds of elective courses are available for all the students.

(2)Students choose their own electives for different reasons. (3)For some, practical skills are the essence of college education, so courses on computer science, marketing and finance are highly preferred. For others, optional courses are good chances for them to satisfy their personal interests, so courses concerning literature, history, and philosophy are welcomed.

(4)Take me as an example. I stand for the notion that the university is not only a place for survival skills, but also a place of knowledge and critical reasoning. (5)Although my major is mathematics, the electives I choose consist of English Literature, an Introduction to Western history, and Art, which are really helpful to broaden my horizon.【行文点评】

(1) 点题,指出所有的学生都可以上各种各样的选修课。

(2) 这是第二段的中心句,该段写学生选择不同的选修课有不同的原因。

(3) 具体指出一些人为了学习实用技能,另一部分人为了满足自己的个人兴趣。

(4) 作者以自己为例说明选择选修课的原因。

(5) 指出我选择的选修课并说明原因。【闪光词汇】

put emphasis on 重视,强调;把重点放在……

nurture v. 养育;鼓励;培植

optional adj. 可选择的;随意的;非强制的

stand for 代表;支持;象征;担任……的候选人

notion n. 概念;见解;打算【经典句型】

①With the reform of Chinese higher education, many colleges and universities have begun to put emphasis on nurturing students’ abilities.

②I stand for the notion that …is not only…, but also …

5.Welcome to Our Club [2007年6月真题]

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Welcome to our club. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow in Chinese:

1.本社团的主要活动内容;

2.参加本社团的好处;

3.如何加入本社团。【审题构思】

本文要写一个欢迎辞,既然是欢迎辞就要首先表达对大家的欢迎,说明俱乐部属性,如英语俱乐部,对该俱乐部简单介绍,进而说明加入该俱乐部的好处,可以锻炼英语口语、结识外国朋友,最后不要忘记留下联系方式。除了写作内容上注意这几点之外,还要注意语言表达流畅。【范文】

Welcome to Our Club

(1)Welcome to English club! Our club aims to improve your spoken English. As many Chinese students have trouble in speaking English fluently,our club will provide you many opportunities to practice your oral English.

If you join us: (2)Firstly, you can not only practice spoken English, but also have a good knowledge of western cultures, since we will have different topics about western countries every weekend. Secondly, as we are going to invite foreign teachers from other universities, you will have chances to speak to foreigners, which will surely help improve your spoken English. Moreover, you will become more confident in our club by communicating with others.

(3)You can either email us by English@126.com or call us directly, the phone number is 18888888.We are looking forward to seeing you!【行文点评】

(1) 第一段首先表达对大家加入俱乐部的欢迎,同时对该俱乐部作了简单的介绍。

(2) 这一段详细地说明了加入俱乐部的三个好处,分别是理解西方文化、提高口语水平和增强自信心。

(3) 给出联系方式,号召大家加入。【闪光词汇】

aim to 致力于……

have trouble in doing… 做某事有困难

have a good knowledge of… 了解

become/be confident in… 对……有信心【经典句型】

①Welcome to…club! Our club aims to…

②You can either email us by…or call us directly, the phone number is…

6.A Campaign Speech [2005年1月真题]

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a campaign speech in support of your election to the post of chairman of the student union. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.你认为自己具备了什么条件(能力、性格、爱好等)可以胜任学生会主席的工作;

2.如果当选你将为本校同学做些什么?【审题构思】

竞选演说需要具有感染力和说服力。感染力在于演讲者对于自己的信心和对于听众的承诺。而说服力在于演讲者如何成功表明自己的竞选优势和当选后的工作设想。从这两方面展开论述可以写出一篇很好的演说词。【范文】

A Campaign Speech

Dear fellow students,

(1)I am honored to stand here and give a speech to all of you. (2)First, please allow me to briefly introduce myself: My name is Li Ming, and I am a junior from the School of Foreign Languages. I have been a student assistant in the President’s office for two years.

I am firmly confident in my qualification for the position of President of the Student Union. (3)To begin with, I have gained rich experience in social activities as a student assistant and have also been awarded as “Excellent Student Leader” in my school. In addition, I am a warm-hearted person who is always ready to help anyone in need. I also have a wide range of interests, playing guitar, (4)to name one of them.

If elected as President, I will organize various activities related to academic studies, entertainment and sports to satisfy your needs. Besides, I am going to invite some famous professors to give lectures to you in order that you can learn more knowledge. In short, I would like to serve all the students heart and soul. (5)Please vote for me, and I will prove to you how wise your choice is today. Thank you for your attention.【行文点评】

(1) 演说词开头的固定模式,表示自己很荣幸有机会发表演讲。

(2) 在演说开头通常要进行简单的自我介绍。

(3) 这一段用了三个理由来支持主句的观点,说明自己为何有信心。三个观点分别使用了to begin with、in addition、also作为连接词,过渡自然。

(4) to name one of them是一个不错的列举表达法。

(5) 这是常用的拉票词,使用祈使句恰当地表明了作者的真诚和希望。【闪光词汇】

junior n. 大学三年级学生

qualification n. 资格,条件

award v. 授予,奖励

range n. 范围

entertainment n. 娱乐【经典句型】

①I am honored to stand here and give a speech to all of you.

②I am firmly confident in my qualification for the position of…

③Please vote for me, and I will prove you will not regret your choice today.

7.Student Use of Computers [2002年6月真题]

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Student Use of Computers. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the chart and the outline given below:

1.上图所示为1990年、1995年、2002年某校大学生使用计算机的情况,请描述其变化;

2.请说明发生这些变化的原因(可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以说明);

3.你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。【审题构思】

本题的图示比较简单明了,话题也是与大学生息息相关的计算机使用的情况。在说明数据的时候,要重点指出2000年大学生每周使用计算机的平均时间比1990年和1995年的增长速度快很多。按照提纲的要求,接着重点分析这种现象产生的原因,最后总结使用计算机的困难或问题。【范文】

Student Use of Computers

(1)The decade of 1990s has witnessed a dramatic increase in the student use of computers. As can be seen from the chart, in 1990, a student spent about two hours on the computer every week, in 1995 the number doubled and in 2000, the average time a student spent on the computer per week (2)soared to 20 hours.

(3)Several reasons can account for such changes. (4)First, computers make our life easier. With the help of computers, we can do our work, communicate with our friends, and get entertained without going out of the door. Second, the price of computers becomes lower and lower, thus more and more universities and families can afford to buy one. Consequently, they are always available to the students. Besides, the fast development of the Internet enlarges our demands for using computers.

(5)However, there are still some problems emerging with students’ using computers. Many students get addicted to computer games or vulgar information on the Internet, which is not good for their studies and health. Another problem is that some students spend too much time in front of computers so that they have little time to interact with the real world. Computer is a (6)double-edged sword, so we should try to be the masters instead of slaves of it.【行文点评】

(1) 开篇点题,The decade of 1990s has witnessed…这种表达值得借鉴。

(2) 表示“飙升”,比用increase要好。

(3) 第二段的主题句。

(4) 分三个层次指出了学生使用电脑时间飙升的原因。

(5) 指出大学生使用电脑的问题.

(6) 表示“双刃剑”。【闪光词汇】

decade n. 十年

soar vi. 飙升

get entertained 得到娱乐

available adj. 可以得到的

get addicted to上瘾

vulgar adj. 庸俗的, 粗俗的, 低级的【经典句型】

①The decade of 1990s has witnessed…

②Several reasons can account for…

③…is a double-edged sword, so we should…

8.Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? [2000年6月真题]

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? The first sentence has already been written for you. You should write at least 100 words, and base your competition on the outline given in Chinese below:

1.很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试,理由是……

2.也有人持不同意见,……

3.我的看法和打算。【审题构思】

随着中国与国际交流的深入,人们对英语的口语要求越来越高,因此便出现了很多种类的口语考试,甚至连一些国际公认的英语测试项目,如托福和雅思等,都已将口语纳入必考科目。口语考试的盛行也引来了很多争议,考生在写作过程中要说明这些不同观点并加以简单分析,最后要提出本人的观点,并说明是否有参加英语口语考试的打算。【范文】

Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?

(1)A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English Test, which leads to a heated debate as to whether a test of spoken English is necessary or not. Opinions on the matter vary from person to person. (2)Some people hold the view that it is of great importance to have oral tests, which can examine the testees’ speaking ability on the one hand and stimulate them to speak English on the other.

(3)There are still others having an opposite opinion. They argue that testing spoken English is a waste of time and energy, since written tests can fully measure the testees’ abilities.

(4)As for me, I am with the former viewpoint. I suppose that the oral test is quite indispensable. It goes without saying that spoken English is essential for communicating with English speakers. Oral English tests can not only examine the testees’ oral expressing ability, but also encourage or even force them to speak English rather than just read and write it. Therefore, as a world trade major, (5)it is time that I tried my utmost to improve my oral English and participated in such a test.【行文点评】

(1) 开篇点题,指出是否需要口语考试引发了人们激烈的争论。

(2) 一部分人认为口语测试很有必要。

(3) 另一部分人持相反的观点。

(4) 这是观点对比型文章中经常用到的句子,作者同意前一种观点。

(5) 提出自己的打算。【闪光词汇】

optional adj. 可选择的

component n. 组成部分

heated debate激烈争论

stimulate v. 刺激,鼓舞,激励

indispensable adj. 不可或缺的,必需的【经典句型】

①…leads to a heated debate as to whether…or not.

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