托福满分范文120篇精讲(txt+pdf+epub+mobi电子书下载)

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It is tempting to think the more time a student spends on his studies, the better an education he/she can hope to receive.

However, I hold the opposite opinion that it is impossible for a student to get a better education by excessively studying 11 months a year. More schooling does not necessarily equate a better education as education encompasses a rich array of aspects other than simply knowledge from textbooks.引出话题

用一个误区，即反方观点，引出话题。表明观点

转折表明自己的观点，更长的学期并不会带来更好的教育。Body paragraph 1

A longer period of study contributes very little to a better education.

It has been reported that people cannot focus on one thing for more than a few hours at a time. If they force themselves to stretch their attention span, then their physical condition deteriorates, leading to a decline in efficiency and productivity, be it at work or at study.

It is not surprising, for example, that a skilled flutist might have difficulty in controlling her armature and overall posture for hours without drifting her focus to other less important things, like the hot guy in the trumpet section. A programmer, however skillful in coding, could not tease out a single bug after spending more than ten hours in front of the computer.

Similarly, if students were forced to sit in the classroom for more than the regular school year of 8 months, listening to monotonous lectures one after another, they would soon become exhausted and even rebellious to such an unreasonable arrangement. They will become absent-minded in class and slack off on homework assignments.

In contrast, if students take several months off after a normal semester of intense work, they can charge their batteries and return to the next semester, more engaged and rejuvenated.主题句

理由一：长时间的学习并不会带来更好、更高效的学校教育。解释主题句

专注于一件事太久的结果一般都是体力、效率和生产力的下降。类比论证

这是一种很实用的写作手法。基于两个对象的某些相似的性质，推断它们在其他性质上有可能也有相似之处。音乐家和程序员都需要娱乐和休闲才能继续专注于自己的工作。解释主题句

归纳推理到学生身上。学生也是一样，被迫坐在教室里超过8个月，他们的反应也会如同前面的音乐家和程序员，学习效率极大降低。对比论证

如果孩子有个长暑假可以做些与学习无关的事情，他们在重返校园时才会对学习有更积极的态度。Body paragraph 2

The second reason for my stance is that the best education occurs outside of school.

A several-month long summer break, for example, will allow students to go outside of their typical environment and to get in touch with the real world. They gain the opportunities to travel and socialize with people they normally wouldn’t interact with. These meaningful experiences offer an education that students could never hope to receive at school.

I once met a person during my own summer vacation who was volunteering at a non-profit organization aimed at helping children from less privileged families. She sacrificed a high-paying job offer from a multinational company to devote her time wholeheartedly to helping those children. The encounter made me realize the power of dreams and how certain aspirations can motivate a person to leave behind materialistic desires, such as a stable job.

Another example is a boy whom I met in Beijing. He was brought up in an orphanage as he lost his parents at an early age. But he remained optimistic and always wore the biggest smile on his face. We chatted and joked often. His sunny nature taught me that true happiness lies not in one’s circumstances, but in one’s state of mind. No matter how meager lives we lead, a simple smile can keep us happy from within. Those are precious lessons that I have stayed with me to this day.

If I myself hadn’t gone on a vacation, I would have missed the education of a lifetime and become a very different person today.主题句

理由二：真正的教育并没有发生在学校之内，而是在学校之外。解释主题句

假期给孩子们机会去了解世界，结识跟他们不一样的朋友。这些经历也是教育的一部分。举例论证

细化前面的解释，采用多例法。Another example引出第二个例子，每个都是对于前面逻辑链的细化。遇到了什么样具体的人，学到了什么样具体的人生经验。总结例子

用一个虚拟语气，总结前面两个例子。Conclusion

Therefore, 11 months of education per year amounts to a harmful plan. I would encourage students to take breaks and take them often.结尾段

重述观点并且总结分论点。参考译文

人们很容易认为一个学生花费越多的时间学习，他/她就越有希望得到更好的教育。但是，我持相反的意见，学生通过学习11个月就能得到更好的教育是不可能的。更多的学校学习不一定意味着能得到更好的教育，因为教育包罗万象，并非简单的课本知识。

长时间的学习不会带来更好的教育。据报道，人们无法好几个小时都专注于一件事。无论是在工作中还是在学习中，如果他们强迫自己延长注意力可以集中的时间，他们的身体状况就会恶化，导致学习效率低下，学习效果不佳。无怪乎，例如一个熟练的长笛演奏家即使没有去关注其他不那么重要的东西，比如吹小号的帅哥，也可能很难在几个小时内一直控制好自己的乐器和整体姿态。一个程序员，无论编码如何熟练，在电脑前花十多个小时后也无法梳理出一个错误。类似地，如果学生被迫在教室里待了超过常规学年的8个月，听着一个接一个单调的讲座，他们会很疲惫，甚至会对这种不合理的安排产生逆反。他们会变得心不在焉，懈怠家庭作业。相反，如果学生在一个学期紧张的学习后休息几个月，他们可以重新充电，下个学期重返校园时，他们会更加积极并重新焕发活力。

支持我的立场的第二个原因是，最好的教育发生在校外。例如，一个数月的长暑假可以让学生走到他们习惯的学习环境之外，去接触现实世界。他们有旅行的机会，可以和他们通常接触不到的人社交。这些有意义的经历提供了学生永远也不能在学校得到的教育。我曾经在暑假遇到一个人，当时她正在一个非营利性组织做志愿者，这个组织旨在帮助贫困家庭的儿童。她牺牲了在跨国公司高薪工作的机会，只是为了全心全意地帮助那些孩子。这次相遇让我意识到梦想的力量以及某些抱负可以激发一个人抛弃物欲，比如一份稳定的工作。另一个例子是关于我在北京遇到的一个男孩。他早年失去了父母，从小在孤儿院长大。但他非常乐观，脸上总是挂着灿烂的微笑。我们经常聊天，开玩笑。他阳光灿烂的天性告诉我，真正的幸福不在于一个人的环境，而在于一个人的心境。无论我们的生活多么贫穷，一个简单的微笑就可以使我们从内心深处感到快乐。这些都是直到今日我都还牢记的宝贵经验。如果我自己没有去度假，我就会错过千载难逢的教育并且成为一个与今日相比非常不同的人。

因此，每年11个月的教育等同于一个有害的计划。我总会鼓励学生休假，并且经常休假。亮点词汇与实用搭配

a rich array of 各种各样的；丰富的

stretch one’s attention span 延长注意力可集中的时间

a decline in efficiency and productivity 效率和生产率的下降

drift one’s focus to… 注意力转移到…

become exhausted and 变得疲惫甚至叛逆

even rebellious absent-minded 心不在焉的

slack off on… 在…上松懈

rejuvenated 恢复活力的

get in touch with 联系…；接触到…

socialize with 社交

less privileged families 贫困家庭

devote one’s time wholeheartedly to 全身心投入

leave behind materialistic desires 丢掉物质欲望举一反三

利用范文素材，完成下列题目的一个主体段，每段不能少于150词。

Some people think that it is an important part of a child’s education to go on a field trip (for example, museums), other people think a child’s time is better spent learning in a classroom at school. Which do you prefer?

Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific examples and reaons to support your answer.

The most important education for students should be conducted in classroom, not out of the classroom.2. One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take part-time jobs.范文Introduction

Some parents contend that the primary concern of teenage children should be their studies and that working part-time is not only unnecessary but even distracting.

However, I hold the opposite view. I believe that work experience can be as beneficial for teenagers as campus life and that early exposure to the working world will prepare them well for adulthood.引出话题

用反方观点，引出话题。表明观点

转折表明自己的观点，兼职让孩子们为成年生活做好准备。Body paragraph 1

First of all, working part time raises a young person’s sense of frugality, an attribute that will serve them well when they begin managing their own finances.

It’s true that working teenagers would encounter many challenges and difficult situations. For example, one might be shouted at by a boss who may be reacting to nothing more than a minor accounting mistake; or a marketing intern may experience months of low pay until they are able to earn their own commissions; a dish washer might be required to compensate the restaurant for any plate he or she accidentally breaks.

Such students might have been just as much the kid who frequents social media on all the latest gadgets, wears designer brand shoes, carries luxury bags, and lead lavish lifestyles without any sense of consumer restraint or economic reality. Yet, the experience of a part-time job that pays a menial salary should awaken even the blithest spendthrift, and expose them to the harsher side of the economic spectrum. Such valuable lessons that can only be gained from working part-time will play a considerable role in the development and maturation of a teenager.

Furthermore, even if the amount of money earned by working part-time is not much, it can still serve as the basis for a saving account that will grow with the teenager.主题句

理由一：做兼职会让大学生知道节俭的重要性，为将来理财做好准确。解释主题句

整个解释以“such students might have been...”为界。其之前是逻辑链的前半段，用例子细化做兼职会遇到什么样的困难；后是逻辑链的后半段，遇到这些困难以后，孩子们就会知道赚钱不易，有意识地停止他们无节制的消费。段内递进

给出证明主题句的第二个理由，兼职挣得钱虽然不多，但是储蓄的基础。Body paragraph 2

Another benefit to holding a part-time job is that the experience can help young people identify suitable economic niches, thereby enabling them to achieve success earlier in life.

Restricted to an ivory tower totally removed from the real world, the majority of young people, including university seniors who will soon enter the job market, have no clear idea what kind of job they are interested in and what kind of career they want to develop. How could a person without even a sense of self achieve anything in the future?

In this sense, there may be no better means by which parents can prepare their children for the future than by enabling them to find limited work opportunities before graduation.

For example, by working in a cafeteria and observing the manner in which a small business operates, a student begins to understand how to run a business and come to realize that good management requires not only developing and implementing strategies and plans but also the ability to give employees a great sense of belonging.

Or consider an intern reporter in a newspaper office. This student aspiring to become a world-renown journalist may find that the mastery of written language is only a part of the skill set needed to become an insightful and persuasive news reporter. In fact, a good reporter must also demonstrate excellent social skills and tact in pursuing a difficult story and then presenting it to the world.

With a better understanding of what kinds of work different careers may entail, young people are more likely to make wiser career choices and end up with jobs that are both economically productive and personally fulfilling.主题句

理由二：做兼职会让大学生了解自己最适合做什么工作，为日后的成功打下基础。背景信息

段落背景本质即为我们为什么会想到这个点。对于此段，为什么我们会提出兼职帮助大学生发现自己？很简单，现在很多孩子都非常迷茫，不知道自己适合做什么工作。一个没有自我意识的人，怎么可能获得成功？解释主题句

重申主题句，考虑到这个现象，家长应该让孩子做兼职，帮助孩子了解现实世界。举例论证

作者在此处并列了两个例子，以Or为界。两个例子都是对于主题句的细化。孩子做了什么样的兼职，对现实世界有了什么样的深刻理解。解释主题句

承接上文，对现实有了深刻理解后，年轻人更容易找到一个回报丰厚又令人充实的工作。Conclusion

In conclusion, the experience of a part time job can impart knowledge that is more useful to teenagers than the rote knowledge they find in their textbooks.

Such an experience can also teach them to be financially independent. Furthermore, having a part-time job helps students to build up a social network, enhance their people skills, and lay the foundation for a future career.

That is why I am firmly convinced that one of the best ways for parents to help their teenage children prepare for adulthood is by encouraging them to take part-time jobs.总结分论点深化主题

作者在此处扩展了兼职的其他好处：保持经济独立，建立社交圈，为将来职业打下基础。重申主题

重述总观点。参考译文

有些家长认为，少年儿童应主要关注自己的学习，兼职工作不仅不必要，而且分散注意力。然而，我持有相反的观点。我相信，对青少年来说，工作经验和校园生活一样有好处。早早接触职场会帮助他们为成年做好准备。

首先，兼职工作提高年轻人的节俭意识，在他们开始管理自己的财务时，他们会从这种意识中获益。工作的青少年的确会遇到许多挑战和困难。例如，他们可能会被老板大骂，这个老板可能只是对一个小小的计算错误反应过激；再比如，营销实习生可能会拿几个月的低工资，直到他们能够赚取自己的佣金；洗碗工可能需要为任何他们意外打碎的餐具补偿餐厅。这些学生可能曾经是经常使用最新科技产品登录社交媒体、穿着设计师品牌鞋、背着奢侈包、过着奢华生活的孩子，他们没有任何克制消费的意识，也没有认识到自己的经济现状。然而，兼职工作拿微薄薪水的经历会唤醒那些花钱最大手大脚的人，使他们接触到社会阶级中更严酷的一面。这些只能从兼职工作中获得的宝贵经验将会在青少年的发育和成熟方面发挥重要作用。此外，即使兼职工作赚取的金额不多，它仍然可以作为与青少年一起成长的储蓄账户的基础。

兼职工作的另一个好处是，这些经验可以帮助年轻人发现自己最适合的工作，从而使他们能够更早获得成功。被困在一个完全脱离于现实世界的象牙塔中，大多数年轻人，包括即将进入职场的大四学生，都不清楚他们对什么工作感兴趣、他们想要发展什么样的职业。一个没有自我意识的人如何在未来获得成就？从这个意义上来说，对于父母来说，没有比让孩子们毕业之前尝试工作以便更好地帮助孩子为未来做好准备的方法了。例如，通过在自助餐厅工作并观察小企业经营的方式，学生开始理解如何经营企业，并认识到良好的管理不仅需要制定和实施战略和计划，而且还需要有给予员工归属感的能力。或者，比如一个在报社实习的记者。这位渴望成为世界知名记者的学生可能会发现，掌握书面语言只是一个有洞察力和有说服力的新闻记者所需掌握技能的一小部分。事实上，一个好记者还必须有出色的社交技能，以及有能够采访跟进一个困难故事并且将其呈现给世界的手段。通过更好地了解不同职业可能涉及哪些种类的工作，年轻人更有可能做出更聪明的职业选择，最终找到一个回报丰厚又能实现个人梦想的工作。

总之，兼职工作的经验可以向青少年传授知识，这些知识比他们在教科书中读到的那些更有用。这种经历也可以教会他们在财政上独立。此外，兼职工作能帮助学生建立一个社交网络，提高他们的人际技能，并为未来的职业奠定基础。这就是为什么我坚信父母帮助孩子为成年做好准备的最好的方法就是鼓励孩子做兼职。亮点词汇与实用搭配

early exposure to 早期接触到…

manage finance 理财

encounter many challenges and difficult situations 遇到挑战和困境

nothing more than… 不过，仅仅

earn commissions 赚取佣金

compensate for 补偿

frequent 常到，常去

lead lavish lifestyles 过着奢靡的生活

awaken the blithest spendthrift 唤醒挥霍无度的人

serve as the basis for 作为…的基础

identify one’s niche 找到合适的职业

an ivory tower 象牙塔

a sense of self 自我意识

develop and implement strategies 开发并实施策略

a great sense of belonging 强烈的归属感

the mastery of 对…的精通

make wiser career choices 做出更明智的职业选择

economically productive 经济上富有成效的

personally fulfilling 使个人有满足感的

impart knowledge 传授知识

financially independent 经济独立的

build up a social network 建立社交网

enhance one’s people skills 增强社交技能

lay the foundation for 打下…的基础举一反三

利用范文素材，完成下列题目的一个主体段，每段不能少于150词。

The most important education that a person gets is from outside schools and classrooms.

In order to become a financially responsible adult, people should be taught how to manage money at an early age.3. All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what field they study in.范文Introduction

Today, students study a wide range of subjects and disciplines in universities. However, history courses are on the decline and are routinely merged with other subjects.

Traditionalists argue that young people know little of the history of their country or the evolution of human society and the subject should be compulsory for all students, regardless of their majors.

I disagree with this view, as the proposition is problematic.背景介绍

介绍这个话题产生的原因：学生大学期间所学科目很多。而历史课不断被削减。引出话题

用traditionalists的话引出话题：年轻人对历史所知甚少，应该把历史列为必修课。表明观点

表明个人观点，历史课不应该在大学成为必修课。Body paragraph 1

First and foremost, the compulsory study of history will put more pressure on students and eat into their precious time.

College students already study theoretical and professional courses and their schedules are already very tight. For example, a medical student is obliged to complete academic studies for credits, and acquire clinical experience.

Students with such a heavy workload cannot afford to study irrelevant courses, such as history. This would unnecessarily burden students and jeopardize studies, exacerbating their worries about meeting multiple deadlines and passing final exams.主题句

扩展历史课弊端一：施加压力，占用学生学习时间。解释主题句

学生现在学习任务已经很重，历史课成为必修课会加剧学生的忧虑。Body paragraph 2

Second, the requirement to study history leads to unnecessary cost for parents and students.

Universities will need to recruit personnel, including administrative staff and lecturers to deliver the lectures and tutorials, which will increase the cost of schooling. These costs will be passed onto the student and will be reflected in higher tuition fees, depriving many underprivileged students of an opportunity to attend university.主题句

扩展历史课弊端二：带来不必要的经济压力。解释主题句

大学需要招聘，增加学校教育的成本。这些成本会导致学费增加，甚至剥夺贫困学生上大学的机会。Body paragraph 3

Admittedly, studying history is beneficial for young people.

Students will gain an understanding of how society evolved and learn not to repeat mistakes made in the past. For instance, students would learn about the causes of the two World Wars and other bloody battles that claimed the lives of millions and changed the course of history.

Also, students could gain a better understanding of current issues by studying historical events. For example, by studying the American Revolution, a student can be enlightened on the concept of democracy and its application to the modern world.

However, historical knowledge can be gained by methods other than compulsory courses. In this day and age, television programs, films, documentaries, books, and museums are all available options for students to learn about history.让步段

以退为进，先承认学习历史确实有好处。历史课好处一

了解社会进程，避免重复犯错。并举例细化：了解二战和其他战争的起因。段内并列，历史课好处二

以史为鉴，通过学习历史了解时事。并举例细化：通过学习美国独立战争，了解现代世界的民主概念和其应用。段内转折

学习历史固有好处，但是历史知识获得渠道多样，不一定要强制大学生上历史课。Conclusion

In conclusion, although there are a few benefits to studying history, it would be unfair to burden a student both academically and financially.

In addition, the benefits a history course would provide can be obtained through other means.重述观点

总结所有分论点。参考译文

今天，学生们在大学里学习很多学科。然而，历史课程正在减少并经常与其他科目合并。传统主义者认为，年轻人几乎不了解他们的国家和人类社会发展的历史，这个学科应该是所有学生的必修课，不论他们学的是什么专业。我不同意这种观点，因为这个论述存在问题。

首先，历史必修课将给学生施加更多的压力，并占据他们宝贵的时间。大学生已在学习理论和专业的课程，他们的日程安排已经很紧张了。例如，一个医学院的学生有义务完成学术研究的学分，还要掌握临床经验。有如此繁重工作量的学生负担不起学习无关的学科，比如历史。这会增加不必要的负担并危及学生的学业，加剧他们对达成各种最后期限和通过期末考试的忧虑。

其次，学习历史的要求会引起家长和学生不必要的花费。大学将需要招聘人手，包括行政人员和讲师来做讲座和辅导学生，这将增加学校教育的成本。这些成本将转嫁给学生并将体现在更高的学费上，剥夺了许多贫困学生上大学的机会。

诚然，学习历史对年轻人是有益的。学生将了解社会如何演化并学会避免过去犯过的错误。例如，学生们可以了解到两次世界大战和其他夺去了数百万人生命并改变了历史进程的血腥战争的起因。此外，学生可以通过学习历史事件更好地了解当前的问题。例如，通过学习美国独立战争，学生可以更加了解民主的概念和它在现代世界的实际应用。但是，历史知识可以通过非必修课的方法获得。在今天，电视节目、电影、纪录片、书籍和博物馆都是学生学习历史的可行方法。

总之，尽管学习历史有一些好处，但是加重学生学术和财务上的负担是不公平的。此外，历史课程带来的好处可以通过其他手段获得。亮点词汇与实用搭配

a wide range of 范围广泛的

merge with 与…合并

regardless of 无论，不管

eat into one’s precious time 侵蚀宝贵的时间

be obliged to 不得不

a heavy workload 繁重的工作负荷

jeopardize 危害

exacerbate one’s worries 加重忧虑

meet multiple deadlines 赶上各种最后期限

recruit personnel 招聘人员

administrative staff 行政人员

deliver lectures 发表演讲

deprive of 剥夺

underprivileged students 穷困的学生

gain an understanding of 理解；了解

repeat mistakes 重复错误

be enlightened on 在…方面受到启发

compulsory courses 必修课

burden sb. both 在学术和经济上给

academically and financially 某人负担举一反三

利用范文素材，完成下列题目的一个主体段，每段不能少于150词。

Universities should require all their students to learn about foreign cultures as well as their own culture.

University students should be required to take basic science courses no matter what field they study.4. Younger school children (aged five to ten) should be required to study art and music in addition to math, language, science and history.范文Introduction

In today’s society there is too much emphasis on the core subjects of math, languages and science to the detriment of a wider and more balanced curriculum. Humanities and creative disciplines such as the arts and music, are marginalized and often fall by the wayside.

In my opinion, the exploration of creativity through art and music is just as important for a child’s development as the study of core subjects. Also, education is more than just mastering essential skills and knowledge.背景介绍

介绍这个话题产生的原因：现代教育太过强调一些诸如数学、语言、科学等核心科目的重要性。创造性学科，比如艺术、音乐，越来越边缘化。引出话题+表明观点

艺术和其他科目同等重要。教育不仅仅是掌握核心技能和知识。Body paragraph 1

Primarily, studying art and music encourages creative thinking amongst children.

In art and music classes, unconventional thinking is encouraged so that students are able to come up with novel and interesting ideas. That is to say, students can be taught creative skills, and then be given free rein to express themselves.

These sorts of activities build up imagination and intellectual curiosity, as well as, encourage inventive thinking, which will help children to think outside the box and provide innovative solutions to problems as adults.主题句

扩展好处一：音乐、艺术刺激创造力。解释主题句

在艺术课上，老师鼓励非常规思维，鼓励孩子表达自己。→这类活动帮助孩子解放思想，提出创新想法。Body paragraph 2

Second, an arts education helps with the emotional development of a child.

It will help them to cope with the stresses of life and make them less vulnerable to depression and anxiety.

Researchers are currently experimenting with art and music for therapeutic purposes; initial studies show that art therapy is very effective in addressing emotional and psychological issues.

I know from personal experience that art can really help. When I was younger, I was lean and weak, which made me a prime target for the bullies in school. In art class, I drew myself as a superhero and this process of reimagining myself gave me the strength to cope with the bullying and eventually stand up for myself.

Therefore, by providing non-threatening means for children to express their thoughts and feelings, art and music sooth their nerves and restore their souls.主题句

扩展好处二：艺术教育有利于情感发育。解释主题句

音乐艺术帮助孩子更好应对压力。引用论证

引用了researchers的观点证明艺术在舒缓压力方面的作用。举例论证

通过个人经历，论证艺术对于人情感发育的影响。艺术给了我力量去面对校园霸凌。段尾总结

重述主题句。Body paragraph 3

Finally, a strong engagement with art and music will help children to develop an appreciation of the beauty around them, and this will make them more environmentally-conscious.

That is not to say that a subject like math cannot contain beauty, but beauty is experienced much more frequently and directly in the arts. Stunning landscape painting, soul-stirring music and pictures in galleries are all examples of beauty, which students can appreciate.

Such exposure will make children more likely to appreciate the beauty of a forest, habitat or woodland, or an alternative way of living and recognize the importance of protecting such things from destruction.主题句

扩展好处三：学习音乐和艺术有利于培养孩子的环保意识。

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