雅思8分密钥：杨凡雅思写作30天突破(txt+pdf+epub+mobi电子书下载)

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考生应如何备考雅思写作？要谈这个问题，还要从考生在雅思写作中所欠缺的四个方面说起。考生在雅思写作中所欠缺的四个方面分别是审题、结构、思路和语言。这既是雅思写作的四个评分标准，也是笔者提出的“四要素作文法”。考生在审题方面常犯的错误是：

没有抓住题目的讨论话题和提问方式的要点，造成跑题或遗漏了题目中的某些要求。考生在结构方面的问题是：

自由式写法——想到哪儿，写到哪儿，条理性差，结构混乱。考生在思路方面的问题是：

无话可说，写不够字数；车轱辘话来回说；前言不搭后语，逻辑性差。考生在语言方面的问题是：

词汇缺乏；语法错误较多；用词简单，句型单一，缺乏变化。

在上述四个方面中，考生在思路和语言方面更为欠缺。

如何解决上述问题呢？

要提高写作水平和写作成绩，掌握一定的写作理论和写作技巧固然重要，但更有效的办法是仔细研读、背诵和模仿真题范文。

本书正是在这样的思想指导下编写而成的，包括一些写作理论和写作技巧的讲解。但占本书最大篇幅的是大量的真题范文，每篇范文都是7分—8分的标准。对于重点范文，笔者进行了详细的分析说明，总结了范文中使用的高频词汇、高分词汇和高分句型。本书中的写作题目都是以前雅思写作考试的真题。在雅思考试中，题目是重复使用的，所以这些题目在大家实际参加考试时，都有可能遇到。背熟这些真题范文对雅思写作获得高分大有帮助。不过，每篇文章中所表达的观点都是笔者个人的意见，仅供考生参考。

本书在编写过程中得到了李铁戎、李钧、郑兰宾、赵伯兰、李铁成、郑芝梅、陈光平、郑芝真、杨维勤、朱海霞、郑珊珊、李桂枝、张宝娟、冯光辉、杨林、林桂珍、张瑞娟、朱倩雨、陈培君、文苑、朱晋枫、王悫、杨希屿、陈曦、杨艳萍、赵梦、郭笑苗、王珏、赵鹏、陈成、蓝雅颖、瞿文伊、王斐的帮助，在此向他们表示衷心的感谢。

祝广大考生雅思考试取得成功！30天雅思写作备考计划时间内容Day1阅读第一章内容。Days2-10阅读第二章的“概述”和“辩论型题目写法一：五段论式写法”。Day2仔细阅读写作真题1的范文和范文分析说明，背诵范文Day3仔细阅读写作真题2的范文和范文分析说明，背诵范文Day4仔细阅读写作真题3的范文和范文分析说明，背诵范文Days5-8从写作真题4—23中任意选择四篇文章，仔细阅读、背诵。Days9-10从写作真题4—23中任意选择两个话题，先用“五段论式写法”练习写作，然后对照范文，最好能让英语老师仔细修改一下。Days11-17阅读第二章的“辩论型题目写法二：对称式写法”。Day11仔细阅读并背诵写作真题24的范文Day12仔细阅读并背诵写作真题25的范文Days13-15从写作真题26—38中任意选择三篇文章，仔细阅读、背诵。Days16-17从写作真题26—38中任意选择两个话题，先用“对称式写法”练习写作，然后对照范文，最好能让英语老师仔细修改一下。Days18-22阅读第二章的“解释型题目的写法”。Day18仔细阅读并背诵写作真题39的范文。Days19-20从写作真题40—42中任意选择两篇文章，仔细阅读、背诵。Days21-22从写作真题40—42中任意选择两个话题，先练习，然后对照范文，最好能让英语老师仔细修改一下。Days23-24阅读第二章的“混合型题目的写法”。Day25阅读第二章的“超级实用的模板式句型”，从中选择20句左右的各类句型背诵。Days26-30学术类考生阅读第三章。Day26仔细阅读并背诵写作真题45和写作真题46的范文。Day27仔细阅读并背诵写作真题47和写作真题50的范文。Day28仔细阅读写作真题54、写作真题55和写作真题56的范文。Days29-30从剩下的话题中任意选择两个话题，先自己练习，然后与范文对照，最好能让英语老师仔细修改一下。Days26-30普通类考生阅读第四章。Day26仔细阅读并背诵写作真题57和写作真题58的范文。Day27仔细阅读并背诵写作真题60和写作真题61的范文。Day28仔细阅读写作真题62和写作真题63的范文。Day29仔细阅读写作真题64和写作真题65的范文。Day30就写作真题59练习相关写作，然后与范文对照，最好能让英语老师仔细修改一下。第一章　带给你最真实的雅思写作

Day 1　阅读第一章内容。Day 1一　雅思写作考试的重要性

对绝大多数考生来说，写作可能是雅思四门考试中最难的。但写作可以反映一个人的综合英语水平，它又是四门考试中最重要的，尤其是对准备出国留学的考生，因为决定是否录取你的人会特别关注写作成绩。比如，如果考生其他几门考得不太好，造成总分较低，不够学校的录取要求，但作文成绩却考了7分，那么，学校很可能会考虑录取该考生。相反，如果考生的平均分达到了要求，但作文分数较低，假如只有5分，学校很可能就不录取该考生。二　雅思写作考试的要求

雅思写作考试部分要求写两篇文章，考试时间是60分钟。

普通类（General Training）写作的第一篇是要求写一封英文信，内容涉及咨询、抱怨、感谢、邀请、道歉、给出建议或提出申请等等，字数不少于150词。

普通类写作的第二篇要求写一篇议论文，内容往往涉及社会生活中的热门话题，字数不少于250词。

学术类（Academic）写作第一篇要求对图表进行描述、解释和说明，字数不少于150词。

学术类写作第二篇也要求写一篇议论文，字数不少于250词。

两篇文章的写作时间一共是60分钟，但具体的时间分配没有硬性要求。根据不同的字数要求、写作难度和占分比例，建议考生第一篇文章（信或图表作文）用时20－25分钟，第二篇文章（议论文）用时35－40分钟。考生在刚开始练习的时候，可以不受时间的限制；但要有意识地不断地提高速度，争取在考试前达到时间上的要求。三　雅思写作考试的评分

雅思作文评分实行9分制，从2007年1月起，写作考试开始实行半分制，即考生的作文得分可以是5.5分、6.5分等。两篇文章分别评分，互不影响。最后的得分是第一篇占1/3的比例，第二篇占2/3的比例。

每次考试，写作的平均分都不到5分，能取得6分及以上的成绩的考生不到20％。这说明雅思写作考试还是有相当难度的。四　注意事项

雅思考试要求用铅笔答题。大家在平常练习写作时，就应该使用铅笔，以便在考试时习惯用铅笔答题。

写作考试时，会发给考生一张试题纸和一张答题纸，考生注意要将作文写在答题纸上。考场上不提供草稿纸，而且考生也根本没有时间打草稿。第二章　带给你最实用的雅思议论文写作方法Days 2-10阅读第二章的“概述”和“辩论型题目写法一：五段论式写法”。Day 2仔细阅读写作真题1的范文和范文分析说明，背诵范文Day 3仔细阅读写作真题2的范文和范文分析说明，背诵范文Day 4仔细阅读写作真题3的范文和范文分析说明，背诵范文Days 5-8从写作真题4—23中任意选择四篇文章，仔细阅读、背诵。Days 9-10从写作真题4—23中任意选择两个话题，先用“五段论式写法”练习写作，然后对照范文，最好能让英语老师仔细修改一下。Days 11-17阅读第二章的“辩论型题目写法二：对称式写法”。Day 11仔细阅读并背诵写作真题24的范文Day 12仔细阅读并背诵写作真题25的范文Days 13-15从写作真题26—38 中任意选择三篇文章，仔细阅读、背诵。Days 16-17从写作真题26—38中任意选择两个话题，先用“对称式写法”练习写作，然后对照范文，最好能让英语老师仔细修改一下。Days 18-22阅读第二章的“解释型题目的写法”。Day 18仔细阅读并背诵写作真题39的范文。Days 19-20从写作真题40—42中任意选择两篇文章，仔细阅读、背诵。Days 21-22从写作真题40—42中任意选择两个话题，先练习，然后对照范文，最好能让英语老师仔细修改一下。Days 23-24阅读第二章的“混合型题目的写法”。Day 25阅读第二章的“超级实用的模板式句型”，从中选择20句左右的各类句型背诵。Days 2-10

普通类和学术类的雅思写作考试的第二篇都是写一篇议论文，但每次这两类考试具体的作文题目却不同。学术类的议论文题目一般要难一些，但这两类考试的写作方法和评分标准都是一样的。一　概述（一）字数和时间要求

雅思议论文写作考试的字数要求在250词以上。字数不够会被扣分，所以建议考生一定要写250词以上。不管作文写得如何，首先要满足字数上的要求。但也要注意，一般不要超过320词。字数达到250词的要求之后，分数的高低就主要取决于作文的质量了，所以字数写得太多也没有必要，而且肯定会影响质量。

在考试中，考生没有必要一个一个地数字数。一般每行大约10个词，数一下行数就可以知道大概的字数了。实际上，评卷官也不会一个词挨着一个词地数，只是根据自己的感觉来估测大概的字数。

既然两篇文章的写作时间一共是60分钟，根据不同的字数要求、写作难度以及占分比例，建议考生议论文用时35－40分钟。（二）雅思写作的十大命题

议论文的考试题目很多，但从雅思考过的真题来看，主要可分为如下10类（以下都是真题）：1　命题一：学生生活

·Nowadays it is difficult for university graduates to find a job. Analyse the individual and social reasons and offer some solutions.

·University graduates receive higher salaries than those who have a lower education. Therefore, some people say such students should pay all their tuition fees. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

·Some people think that examinations have some bad effects on both students and teachers. Some people say they do a good job in the evaluation of the students' performance. What is your opinion?

·In recent years, many young people decide to further their studies abroad. What are the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad?

·Some people think that, in order to improve the quality of education, students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticise their teachers. Others feel that this will result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. What do you think?

·When a student chooses the future career, what factors and whose opinions should he consider?

·Some people like different friends. Others like similar friends. Which kind of friend do you prefer? Explain why.2　命题二：家庭生活

·Should old people stay at home or be placed in nursing homes?

·Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

·Nowadays, nurseries and kindergartens take care of children from an early age, so women can return to their work and children can get used to society early. Is this a good thing? What's your opinion?

·Corporal punishment（体罚）has been practised in families for quite a long time. In recent years, people's attitudes towards this practice have undergone drastic changes. Nowadays many people strongly oppose it. Should corporal punishment be abolished?

·It is generally acknowledged that families are now not as close as they used to be. Give possible reasons and your recommendations.3　命题三：媒体

·Some people hold that it is the television that alienates the relationship of family members. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

·Advertisements are getting their way into people's lives. Discuss the effects of advertisements on people. Should all ads be banned?4　命题四：动物

·Should experiments be conducted on animals for the benefit of human beings?

·Some people think that the amount of time and money spent on the protection of wild animals should be spent in improving the well-being of humans. To what extent do you agree or disagree?5　命题五：现代科技

·Some people hold that the development of modern science and technology leads to environmental pollution and energy shortage. What do you think?

·Computers do not help children to learn more effectively. On the contrary, their usage has a negative effect on both the physical and mental development of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

·Nowadays the jet plane is considered to be one of the most important and influential inventions in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

·What are the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet?6　命题六：环境、资源和交通

·The only way to improve the safety on the roads is to give much stricter punishments for driving offences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

·What are the causes of water shortages? Please also offer some solutions to deal with this problem.

·Moving large companies and factories with their employees to the countryside could solve traffic and housing problems in major cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

·Traffic jam is a problem in most cities all round the world at present. What causes the problem? Make some recommendations.7　命题七：传统与发展变化

·In some countries, the national traditional arts are facing extinction. Some people think that the government should support them. Do you agree or disagree? What should the government do?

·With the development of society, customs and habits have changed a lot. Is it a good or bad phenomenon? What's your opinion?8　命题八：政府

·Some people propose that smoking should be banned completely. What is your opinion?

·Some people say the government should not put money in the arts, such as music, opera and paintings, but instead, should spend more money on construction of infrastructure. Discuss.9　命题九：平等

·In some countries, sports and entertainment personalities earn higher salaries than other professionals like doctors, nurses and teachers. Why do you think this happens in some societies and do you consider it good or bad?

·Many females join the army in some countries. Some people think women should not be allowed to serve as soldiers. Do you agree or disagree?10　命题十：社会问题

·Should criminals be sent to prison or should they do something else as a punishment? Explain your opinion and give your reasons.

·Unlike other countries, the police in the UK do not carry guns. Some think this leaves citizens unprotected, while others consider it reduces the overall level of violence in society. Give reasons for both sides of this argument and state your own opinion.

·Differences between countries have become less evident. For example, nowadays the same films, fashions, brands and TV programmes are found worldwide. To what extent do you think the disadvantages of this outweigh its advantages?

·International tourism has become one of the biggest industries in the world. Some people think it unfortunately causes a lot of tension rather than understanding between peoples from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?（三）雅思作文的写作格式

雅思写作考试不要求写标题，所以在考试时，考生直接从正文的第一段开始写，不用写文章的标题，以免耽误时间。而且如果标题出现错误，反而弄巧成拙。

写作时，要注意分段，不要全文都写成一段。分段有两种格式：1　缩进式

这种格式，每段的第一行向右缩进去4到8个字母，段与段之间不加空行，与写中文文章类似。例如：

The problem of traffic jams in big cities is very common in developing countries and China is no exception. But as to how to solve this problem, people hold different opinions. Some suggest that, in China, we should give priority to the development of private cars, others argue that public transportation should be put first. I am for the latter solution.

Firstly, a well-established public transportation system is far more efficient and economical than private cars. We all know that one car holds at most five people while one bus can hold at least 50, ten times as many as a car does. So to move the same amount of people we need ten times the number of vehicles than if we use private cars. The more vehicles on the roads, the more chances for traffic jams to occur.

Secondly, land is rare in cities and parking places for private cars occupy much more land than buses do. In order to provide enough parking for private cars, municipal governments have to cut the budget for roads. It is obvious that with less private cars we can certainly have more money and land to build longer and wider roads to reduce traffic jams.

Finally, many traffic jams are caused by traffic accidents. With more vehicles in big cities, the probability for accidents to happen is higher and hence more traffic jams. To develop public transportation in big cities means there will be less private cars and less vehicles. The result is clear: There will be less traffic accidents and less traffic jams.

Based on the above discussion, my conclusion is: To solve the problem of traffic jams in big cities in China, the best way is to develop public transportation.2　齐头式

这种格式，每段的第一行不向右缩进，但段与段之间用一空行分开。例如：

In recent years, the Internet has been gaining in popularity at an amazing rate. It seems that anyone who knows little about the Internet is out-of-date and lags far behind the times. The Internet plays such an important role that it has undeniably become one of the biggest concerns in the world.

Those who welcome the Internet hold that it brings us great convenience and efficiency. Firstly, we can send emails to our friends in other countries in a few minutes while sending a traditional letter takes us at least a week and costs much more. Secondly, we can make friends with people from all parts of the world. It overcomes geographical barriers and makes the world smaller. Moreover, the Internet accelerates the flow of information and spreads education to all corners of the globe. We can have easy and quick access to the latest information worldwide. While people speak highly of the Internet, its drawbacks shouldn't be neglected. For one thing, it leads to psychological problems. An Internet-addicted person tends to be isolated, self-centred and unsociable. For another, there is a sharp rise in the rate of cyber crime. More and more financial crimes are committed via the Internet. In addition, it also has negative impacts on young people because there is a lot of obscene and violent content online.

In my opinion, the Internet has more disadvantages. It gives rise to mental problems in people. It results in various computer crimes. It is harmful to the growth of the youth. Something should be done as soon as possible to protect people from the negative effects of the Internet.（四）雅思写作的三大命题形式

雅思写作考试从命题形式上看可分为三大类：1　辩论型题目（Argumentation）

题目给出两件事或两个观点，或者是一件事或一个观点，供考生支持或反对。这类试题在考试中占70％左右。如真题：

·University graduates receive higher salaries than those who have a lower education. Therefore, some people say such students should pay all their tuition fees. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

·Some people think that examinations have some bad effects on both students and teachers. Some people say they do a good job in the evaluation of students' performance. What is your opinion?

·In recent years, many young people decide to further their studies abroad. What are the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad?

·Some people think that, in order to improve the quality of education, students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticise their teachers. Others feel that this will result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. What do you think?

·Some people like different friends. Others like similar friends. Which kind of friend do you prefer? Explain why.2　解释型题目（Explanation）

给出一种现象，让考生说明原因或提供解决方法等。这类试题在考试中占20％。如真题：

·Nowadays it is difficult for university graduates to find a job. Analyse the individual and social reasons and offer some solutions.

·When a student chooses the future career, what factors and whose opinions should he consider?

·What are the causes of water shortage? Please also offer some solutions to deal with this problem.

·It is generally acknowledged that families are now not as close as they used to be. Give possible reasons and your recommendations.3　混合型题目（Mixed）

即题目中包含两个问题，一个是辩论型的问题，一个是解释型的问题。如真题：

·In some countries, sports and entertainment personalities earn higher salaries than other professionals like doctors, nurses and teachers. Why do you think this happens in some societies and do you consider it good or bad?

·In some countries, the national traditional arts are facing extinction. Some people think that the government should support them. Do you agree or disagree? What should the government do?

下几节将分别介绍这三种题型的写法。二　辩论型题目写法一：五段论式写法

对辩论型题目，本书介绍两种写法：五段论式写法和对称式写法。下面首先介绍五段论式写法。（一）结构

五段论式写法的结构共分四段或五段，如下：

如果只写两个理由段，就是四段；如果写三个理由段，就是五段，但统称五段论式写法。（二）开头段写什么

开头段一般写四句左右，大约50个词，它包括以下两方面的内容：

❶　引出题目，阐释题目；

❷　旗帜鲜明地表明自己的观点。（三）理由段写什么

在开头段之后，要写两个或三个理由段，来支持自己提出的观点。理由段是五段论式写法文章最主要的组成部分，是考生的写作重点。

每个理由段（argument paragraph）是由表达一个中心思想（controlling idea or central idea）的一组句子构成，包括一个主题句（topic sentence）和若干个支持句（supporting sentences）。

主题句是表达理由段主题的句子，它用以概括段落大意，要求全段其他文字都围绕它展开。

在主题句之后，要写若干支持句来支持主题句。

两个或三个理由段可以均衡分布，也可以有主有次。但要注意，每个理由段都要论述充分，不能相差太悬殊。（四）结尾段的写法

结尾段的通常写法：重申观点（＋重申理由）（＋提出建议或希望等）。

下面，看一些用五段论式写法写的雅思写作真题的范文。其中前几篇重点范文给出了分析说明。

写作真题1　彻底禁止吸烟

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:Some people propose that smoking should be banned completely. What is your opinion?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.Sample Answer 1

Some people suggest that the government should ban smoking completely. Indeed, smoking is harmful to health and it violates the rights and freedoms of nonsmokers. However, in my opinion, smoking should not be totally banned for the following reasons.

First, tobacco is a commodity to tax. It contributes much to the UK government's revenue. For example, the UK government collects enough from smokers to pay for its entire educational facilities. If smoking is banned, there will be a great loss to the government's income. In addition, more serious social problems will arise, such as unemployment, because the tobacco industry employs a lot of workers.

Second, those who strongly approve of the ban lay too much emphasis on the rights of non-smokers. They ignore smokers' rights. Smoking is just a personal hobby and amusement and it is a kind of lifestyle. It is a stress reliever and can bring great pleasure to smokers. Furthermore, for smokers, nothing seems more difficult and painful than giving up the habit.

We must admit that smoking is detrimental to health. However, the harm that smoking brings to people's health is exaggerated. As long as we smoke in moderation, it will not do great harm to our health. In history, many famous people, such as Sir Winston Churchill, smoked and enjoyed a long life expectancy.

To sum up, I do not agree that smoking should be completely banned. The tobacco industry makes much contribution to the national economy. Smoking brings many psychological benefits to smokers. Moreover, a complete ban of smoking will give rise to many social problems.译　文

有些人建议政府颁布法令彻底禁烟。的确，吸烟有害健康，而且侵犯了不吸烟者的权利和自由。然而，我认为，吸烟不应该被完全禁止。原因如下：

首先，烟草是一种应税商品，对英国政府的税收贡献很大。例如，吸烟者缴纳的税款足以支付英国政府全部的教育设施花销。如果禁止吸烟，政府将会损失一大笔收入。另外，禁烟还会带来更严重的社会问题，例如失业问题，因为烟草行业雇用了大量的工人。

其次，那些强烈赞成彻底禁烟的人过分强调了不吸烟者的权利，却忽视了吸烟者的权利。吸烟仅仅是一种个人爱好和消遣。它是一种生活方式，有助于缓解压力，给吸烟者带来极大的快乐。而且，对吸烟者来说，没有比戒烟更困难、更痛苦的事情了。

我们必须承认，吸烟有害身体健康。然而，人们夸大了吸烟对健康造成的伤害。适度吸烟不会对身体造成特别大的伤害。历史上，有很多名人既吸烟又长寿，例如温斯顿·丘吉尔爵士。

总而言之，我认为吸烟不应该被彻底禁止。烟草工业对国民经济贡献巨大。吸烟能带给吸烟者很多心理方面的益处。此外，彻底禁烟会引发很多社会问题。范文分析说明1　结构

这是五段论式结构，一共写了五段。

第一段：先引出题目，最后一句旗帜鲜明地表达了自己的观点：不应该彻底禁止吸烟。

第二段：给出第一个理由，吸烟为税收作贡献，增加就业。

第三段：给出第二个理由，心理上，吸烟会给吸烟者带来一定的好处。

第四段：给出第三个理由，反驳对方，指出吸烟对身体的危害性被夸大了：只要适度，吸烟不会对身体造成很大伤害。

第五段：先重申观点，然后重申理由。2　高频词汇

suggest / səˈʤest / v. 提议，建议

completely / kəmˈpliːtli / adv. 完全地

violate / ˈvaɪəleɪt / v. 侵犯

freedom / ˈfriːdəm / n. 自由

tax / tæks / n. 税

government / ˈgʌvəmənt / n. 政府

collect / kəˈlekt / v. 收款

facility / fəˈsɪlɪti / n. 设施

income / ˈɪŋkʌm / n. 收入

arise / əˈraɪz / v. 出现

employ / ɪmˈplɔɪ / v. 雇用

approve of 赞成

amusement / əˈmjuːzmənt / n. 娱乐

stress / stres / n. 压力

painful / ˈpeɪnfəl / adj. 痛苦的

admit / ədˈmɪt / v. 承认

make contribution to 为……作贡献

benefit / ˈbenɪfɪt / n. 益处

give rise to 引起

ban / bæn / n. & v. 禁令；禁止

indeed / ɪnˈdiːd / adv. 确实

right / raɪt / n. 权利

commodity / kəˈmɒdɪti / n. 商品；用品

contribute to 为……作贡献

revenue / ˈrevɪnjuː / n. 收入；税收

entire / ɪnˈtaɪə / adj. 全部的

loss / lɒs / n. 损失

serious / ˈsɪəriəs / adj. 严重的

unemployment / ˌʌnɪmˈplɔɪmənt / n. 失业

strongly / ˈstrɒŋli / adv. 强烈地

ignore / ɪgˈnɔː / v. 忽视

lifestyle / ˈlaɪfstaɪl / n. 生活方式

pleasure / ˈpleʒə / n. 快乐

give up 放弃

as long as 只要

psychological / ˌsaɪkəˈlɒʤɪkəl / adj. 心理的

complete / kəmˈpliːt / adj. 完全的❸　高分词汇

lay too much emphasis on...　太强调……

detrimental / ˌdetrɪˈmentl / adj. 有害的

exaggerate / ɪgˈzæʤəreɪt / v. 夸张，夸大

in moderation 适度地，适量地

enjoy a long life expectancy 长寿

注意　高分文章（7分，8分和9分）并不要求每个词都是高分词汇。在高分文章中，出现五个左右的高分词汇就可以了。其他大量使用的还是高频词汇和普通词汇。❹　作文连贯的诀窍

写作时注意使用恰当的关联词，使文章连贯。1）转折　Indeed, smoking is harmful to health and it violates the rights and freedoms of non-smokers. However, in my opinion, smoking should not be totally banned for the following reasons.

的确，吸烟有害健康，而且侵犯了不吸烟者的权利和自由。然而，我认为，吸烟不应该被完全禁止，原因如下。　We must admit that smoking is detrimental to health. However, the harm that smoking brings to people's health is exaggerated.

我们必须承认，吸烟有害身体健康。然而，人们夸大了吸烟对健康造成的伤害。2）举例　Tobacco is a commodity to tax. It contributes much to the UK government's revenue. For example, the UK government collects enough from smokers to pay for its entire educational facilities.

烟草是一种应税商品，对英国政府的税收贡献很大。例如，吸烟者缴纳的税款足以支付英国政府全部的教育设施花销。3）并列／递进　If smoking is banned, there will be a great loss to the government's income. In addition, more serious social problems will arise, such as unemployment, because the tobacco industry employs a lot of workers.

如果禁止吸烟，政府将会损失一大笔收入。另外，禁烟还会带来更严重的社会问题，例如失业问题，因为烟草行业雇用了大量的工人。　Smoking brings many psychological benefits to smokers.

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